Wednesday 17 November 2010

Re-Crit

Today, group 1 had Mark, Mounia, Kemi and Mayuko.
Konrad was absent because of his illness.
We had got students from Germany in our class today, showed them and Benz our new story board added following information:
Location map and 2 biggest features in the site.

more historical maps...


Some I-saw-it.


Images of Canary wharf and Olympic site in the future.

Many photomontages (before & after)

Overview plan by Mark.

Master plan by Mounia.

Habitat plan by Konrad

People movement along Valley


All images and drawings are still draft and need to be developed. There are comments from Benz and students from Germany:
-Less keys on the overview map. Need improve overview/concept map.
-The overview plan looks old fashion.
-Need more people for  the photo-montage of green industry. the one which shows urban agriculture.
-Consider large warehouse and sheds for constructing film sets. And they must look nice.
-Visual and physical access have to be shown clearer somehow.
-Habitat plan have to be more sensitive. The marshland doesn't look marshland, Reed area doesn't look Reed area on the plan.
-Master plan need developing. It looks land-use map at the moment.
-Need to show details of each site larger scale as scenery plan

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